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Lemonade's Good... But...
In my opinion, lemonade doesn't really quench your thirst on a summer day, so I subbed it with something else...lol. Na, I started the image with the small cups and was going for jello but that changed. And eventually I arrived at this. I'm proud of my sky... lol. Comments? O and by the way, the pitcher was made using wings3d (for the most part; the lid of the pitcher was just a cone, I believe from Bryce5).
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25 cents? I will take a cup, Thanks Texture your sidewalk with a light, light gray stone texture, keep up the good work
I argee with LitoNico. It seems that you have mixed worlds. The sidewalk looks like a cartoon, the table reminds mine of that Sims game.
David's comments are all valid. It is pouring here in Washington State (It always is), and I'm out of Earl Grey. I think that your scene needs shadows. the lighting is very flat. The table could be floating for all we know. The lines here are reasonably straight, but there is always something on the horizon.
It's p... pouring down outside and I'm sipping a nice hot cup of tea here in the UK. To my eyes, all the colours look to bright (which may be how it is where you live, but here things would need to be toned down). My other quibble would be that there are too many geometrically perfect straight lines in your image - even here in Lincs the horizon isn't quite straight - nearly but not quite. And none of the fences are even nearly so. And and and... for a clear sky and a sunny day I'd have expected to see some strong shadows cast by the legs of the table and the stuff on it. But these are all things that are easily ammended, you've done the hard bit, now all you need is to tweek it. Keep up the good work with the wings3d.