The composition is good as is the overall colour balance of the image, otherwise I would have to echo Horo's wise comments.
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MunchyArchived
Good point
Ya, I guess the tree does kinda mess up the scale.. never really thought of that. I know that the wall needed a little bit of work, mabey some erosion possibly. The sky that is used there is one of the ones you could place instead of using the skylab that I use now and I agree that I don't like it so much ^_^
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HoroArchived
Scale
The tree spoils the sense of scale. Is everything so small or the tree so large? I like your setup and angle of view. Materials from the library are a great help to get going. The water is not too bad, the rock walls look a bit ?cheap? to me. I don't like the small dark clouds, the rest of the sky is good enough. Now, the two rocks in the water are good, the one at right very good.
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The composition is good as is the overall colour balance of the image, otherwise I would have to echo Horo's wise comments.
Good point Ya, I guess the tree does kinda mess up the scale.. never really thought of that. I know that the wall needed a little bit of work, mabey some erosion possibly. The sky that is used there is one of the ones you could place instead of using the skylab that I use now and I agree that I don't like it so much ^_^
Scale The tree spoils the sense of scale. Is everything so small or the tree so large? I like your setup and angle of view. Materials from the library are a great help to get going. The water is not too bad, the rock walls look a bit ?cheap? to me. I don't like the small dark clouds, the rest of the sky is good enough. Now, the two rocks in the water are good, the one at right very good.