I agree with Rashad about the brightness of this picture and I do not agree with David about the fog patches. I like it very much this way, if it only were less bright. The ground the park banks stand on appears to be very wet - I don't perceive it as grass but rather flat. David is right about the subjects you chose to work with, interesting, not the easiest ones, and you are quite good at it.
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davidbrinnenArchived
As per usual you seem to have a knack for interesting and challenging subjects. Appart from echoing Rashads comments, which seem wise and pertinent. I would point out that maybe since the haze is so central to this peice it might be an idea to utilise a patchy volumentric fog as opposed to the rather uniform fog featured here.
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rashadcarter1Archived
hmm
I like it. I think you've done a great job with a rather challenging technical issue, haze. I think the scene is slightly too bright. The fog would not be so bright white but would be gray. The color of the walkway is also rather bright, a bit too clean to be outdoors. Stunning trees. Unusual reflection going on with the grass. Cool atmospheric scene.
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I agree with Rashad about the brightness of this picture and I do not agree with David about the fog patches. I like it very much this way, if it only were less bright. The ground the park banks stand on appears to be very wet - I don't perceive it as grass but rather flat. David is right about the subjects you chose to work with, interesting, not the easiest ones, and you are quite good at it.
As per usual you seem to have a knack for interesting and challenging subjects. Appart from echoing Rashads comments, which seem wise and pertinent. I would point out that maybe since the haze is so central to this peice it might be an idea to utilise a patchy volumentric fog as opposed to the rather uniform fog featured here.
hmm I like it. I think you've done a great job with a rather challenging technical issue, haze. I think the scene is slightly too bright. The fog would not be so bright white but would be gray. The color of the walkway is also rather bright, a bit too clean to be outdoors. Stunning trees. Unusual reflection going on with the grass. Cool atmospheric scene.