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I agree, this is a funy pic, two dragons playing chess, LOL. One things I really don't like is the ambient and lack off good lighting, how about ibl?
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rashadcarter1Archived
All of the advice given seems to be right. The water needs attention but remember to add some haze also, as the horizon line should not be too sharp of a contrast between water and sky. The lighting is very nice. I think I mat see the sky dome at work and maybe even some ambient channel but overall you've done a nice job of it. I may even see a secondary light or two, but I can't be sure.
Be sure to submerge the bottom of the distant terrain on the left. Nice work and please don;t give up on this one. You could push this to a 5/5 with just a little bit more work!
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davidbrinnenArchived
I too got the impression from the thumbnail that it was a pair of beetles... funny. At a closer look it is clear they are dragons, but they do look somehow smaller than they should. If this is intentional, that is fine, otherwise, consider altering the texture of the rock they are on, that is a good material but it does not look like the kind of thing a large boulder might be formed from. I like the poses and the idea behind this but I believe it could be improved upon with a little work on the background as already suggested.
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icecreammanArchived
Spruce up the background a bit. Looks good, funny concept!
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GWYDION16Archived
agree
at first glance i though it was a upclose pic of a beetle but once i looked at this images haro is right it is dragons. nicly drsigned dragons but water on back is odd and i am sure if it was a little bit darker and had a diffrent patters iwouls help bring out the main focus of the pic and that is the dragons nice nice work.
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HoroArchived
Very cool idea. I first thought thy were bugs, but they are definitely dragons. There is a strange pattern on the water and the terrain is a bit angular. However, the subject matter is very well done!
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. I agree, this is a funy pic, two dragons playing chess, LOL. One things I really don't like is the ambient and lack off good lighting, how about ibl?
All of the advice given seems to be right. The water needs attention but remember to add some haze also, as the horizon line should not be too sharp of a contrast between water and sky. The lighting is very nice. I think I mat see the sky dome at work and maybe even some ambient channel but overall you've done a nice job of it. I may even see a secondary light or two, but I can't be sure. Be sure to submerge the bottom of the distant terrain on the left. Nice work and please don;t give up on this one. You could push this to a 5/5 with just a little bit more work!
I too got the impression from the thumbnail that it was a pair of beetles... funny. At a closer look it is clear they are dragons, but they do look somehow smaller than they should. If this is intentional, that is fine, otherwise, consider altering the texture of the rock they are on, that is a good material but it does not look like the kind of thing a large boulder might be formed from. I like the poses and the idea behind this but I believe it could be improved upon with a little work on the background as already suggested.
Spruce up the background a bit. Looks good, funny concept!
agree at first glance i though it was a upclose pic of a beetle but once i looked at this images haro is right it is dragons. nicly drsigned dragons but water on back is odd and i am sure if it was a little bit darker and had a diffrent patters iwouls help bring out the main focus of the pic and that is the dragons nice nice work.
Very cool idea. I first thought thy were bugs, but they are definitely dragons. There is a strange pattern on the water and the terrain is a bit angular. However, the subject matter is very well done!