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stargate v2

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I put everything inside a custom made pyramid :D with 22inch rims on a side! jk No IBL this time, all lights. Using soft shadows was really a big plus, and DOF too.

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gat

. But there is no right side up :P

spektyr

- I concur with everyone else with the addition of that the gate is still upside down. ;-p

gat

. I see your point Horo, it took me awhile to balance the two in my head and I cam to the conclusion that you are right.

Horo

- It's a question of taste, but I liked v1 better. The main thing, the stargate, ought to stand out more prominently.

gat

. thanks for your comments, its kind off hard to use all of them considering that they are all a bit random, not in a bad way. But it still gives me an idea on what I need to improve. I guess some of the things I put in thrown you off.

davidbrinnen

- It has a more underwatery feel to it and the DOF is working well. I'd suggest possibly darker fogs and hazes. And maybe get rid of the cotton wool clouds?

icecreamman

- I also like the way the DOF turned out. But the cone light shining down is off center. I belive you want it shining on the gate right? This is good, but the underwater version I liked better. Apply the same tweaks to your underwater version, and I think you will really like it.

tina gazcon

* Your stargate looks much better. The only thing I see that is odd is the sky? It looks like you used panoramic with the clouds, but it does'nt blend in at the top with the water coming down. I guess what I am saying is that it shows a seam. I like how you DOF came out.