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They are on their way to their alien Dessert Home land Here's a 2nd Version Cropped http://archclan.deviantart.com/art/Home-land-v2-98267182

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A conversation around the artwork
connorzelinskyArchived

I like it and I agree with the other comments But I have another idea. Select all of the ships and move them up. This would allow you to keep all of your ships and make it look more natural (ships usually fly high). You might have to also move the camera so you can still see them. This is what I do for most of my pictures. Make the ship really far away from the ground. Really nice ships. I like the one in the upper right

archclanArchived

` Your right I have to Move them and Delete some of the objects and Scale them Properly This was a quick one since my 2 computers are going Crazy again

rashadcarter1Archived

Not surprising I find myself in full agreement with Horo. You have doen everything correctly here. I like the haze and the low sun and the stong coloring, all excellent. Scaleing, though, is a big problem here. Scaling is one of the most important considerations as artist must make. Physically it is necessary, and artistically it is significant because the "empasis makes the song." Scale can tell us what is important and what is secondary. It is essentail.

HoroArchived

Nice desert scene. The models might be smoothed a bit further. I think you made something very nice but we have a problem with the size of things and the camera angle. Though I like the detail of the Jeep, it isn't compatible with the nearest aircraft which wings appear to nearly strike the sand. An option would be to get rid of a couple of the very beautiful flying models and perhaps zoom in to the towers. It just looks a bit crowded. I also like the cactus but their size appears to be not fitting. Either they are gigantic or the spacecrafts are very small.