Agreed, the scene si fabulous. without haze, it can be difficult to determine the distances between objects and scale. the horses might be a tad too large. They are in static positions, a bit of movement from the limbs would help.
I really like th elook you get from your scenes, keep it up.
As horo, i agree that sometimes a little background helps us to ensure we offer feedback efficiently. of course I write too much, sio I might not be the best example to follow on that.
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bullit35744Archived
Horo I don't know what else to say about this image...Its a horse barn with horses...and the land is flat because thats how it looks in Indiana.My intent was a nice picture.
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spektyrArchived
Talk about Flatlands! LOL
It's a beautiful scene though. I'd like it more if you work some hilliness into it. ;-)
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HoroArchived
Oh come on, Trish, give us peers also a bit of information. We do not know what you've attempted.
The trees are definitely beautiful and the horses a nice addition. The sky is very fitting (perhaps a tad more haze), the fence and the flowers are good, too, as is the meadow. Perhaps it is the camera angle that disturbs me a bit. Everything looks placed neatly in front of the camera, all lines are horizontal: the path, the fence, the house, the horizon. Perhaps it would look more natural if the camera was angled a bit, giving a look of perspective with lines to go to a vanishing pooint.
Without knowing your intent, it is really difficult to give advice. The picture is very nice, though.
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Agreed, the scene si fabulous. without haze, it can be difficult to determine the distances between objects and scale. the horses might be a tad too large. They are in static positions, a bit of movement from the limbs would help. I really like th elook you get from your scenes, keep it up. As horo, i agree that sometimes a little background helps us to ensure we offer feedback efficiently. of course I write too much, sio I might not be the best example to follow on that.
Horo I don't know what else to say about this image...Its a horse barn with horses...and the land is flat because thats how it looks in Indiana.My intent was a nice picture.
Talk about Flatlands! LOL It's a beautiful scene though. I'd like it more if you work some hilliness into it. ;-)
Oh come on, Trish, give us peers also a bit of information. We do not know what you've attempted. The trees are definitely beautiful and the horses a nice addition. The sky is very fitting (perhaps a tad more haze), the fence and the flowers are good, too, as is the meadow. Perhaps it is the camera angle that disturbs me a bit. Everything looks placed neatly in front of the camera, all lines are horizontal: the path, the fence, the house, the horizon. Perhaps it would look more natural if the camera was angled a bit, giving a look of perspective with lines to go to a vanishing pooint. Without knowing your intent, it is really difficult to give advice. The picture is very nice, though.