Agree with all on this one i will try to re-work it. thanks to all.
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richterArchived
Almost every object in your scene is very nice by itself, though you can work more on the combination in-between all of them. Take the sky for example, as Horo says - it is very good but the ground and the landscape have to fit together with this sky "contributing" and complementing each other. You simply have to "ask yourself" while working - what kind of lighting such sky will provoke and require in scene and all over your models there? "Moonlit clouds, that's great, now I need white bluish faint light over here and over here" etc. And guess what - your fire will pop up quite a bit more, as Rashad stated - it could gain this so-called "dramatic" level of appearance. Don't forget about a orange-tinted radial inside this cave-type of formations to really liven-up the fire. Good luck and good work further, Trish, I know you can improve the image!
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HoroArchived
Ah, the snake, a nice detail. I agree with Rashad again that the countryside could be a bit darker. But the sky is very good. It resembles full moon lit clouds.
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rashadcarter1Archived
I like the idea with this one. For my tastes the light could be more dramatic, dimmer overall with perhaps s of light near the flames
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Agree with all on this one i will try to re-work it. thanks to all.
Almost every object in your scene is very nice by itself, though you can work more on the combination in-between all of them. Take the sky for example, as Horo says - it is very good but the ground and the landscape have to fit together with this sky "contributing" and complementing each other. You simply have to "ask yourself" while working - what kind of lighting such sky will provoke and require in scene and all over your models there? "Moonlit clouds, that's great, now I need white bluish faint light over here and over here" etc. And guess what - your fire will pop up quite a bit more, as Rashad stated - it could gain this so-called "dramatic" level of appearance. Don't forget about a orange-tinted radial inside this cave-type of formations to really liven-up the fire. Good luck and good work further, Trish, I know you can improve the image!
Ah, the snake, a nice detail. I agree with Rashad again that the countryside could be a bit darker. But the sky is very good. It resembles full moon lit clouds.
I like the idea with this one. For my tastes the light could be more dramatic, dimmer overall with perhaps s of light near the flames