Thanks guys. I haven't created anything for awhile and forgot a few of the simpleness of rules. Also have a problem with my power supply unit, have to buy a new one. The current one won't render the scenes without crashing the computer, so I ended up deleting a few things.
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HoroArchived
My main point is that the transition from the horizon to the sky is a bit harsh. I'm quite convinced that the sky is a photograph. It is not always simple to match the two.
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rashadcarter1Archived
The water could be justified with a focus of some sort, perhaps a boat. Maybe you should have combined the two most recent uploads into a single one.
The water looks great. but there is a lack of haze in the scene which makes the items appear somewhat miniature.
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davidbrinnenArchived
Yes I agree with Alex regarding the composition, a good image that could benefit from cropping.
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slepalexArchived
Forgot to ask: clouds it is a photo?
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slepalexArchived
Excellent composition. It is constructed organically and almost faultlessly.
However, I dare to make one essential remark which concerns the construction of the frame. The bottom quarter of the image needs to be cut off! Too much water! Photographers and artists have a rule: the line of the horizon should be approximately on 1/3 or on 2/3 heights of a shot. In this case it is necessary to lower the horizon line below, to give more sky and less water. And more! It is not necessary, that proportions of the monitor (4:3) dictated you a shot format. In this case it will be better to make proportions 16:9 or 16:10.
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Thanks guys. I haven't created anything for awhile and forgot a few of the simpleness of rules. Also have a problem with my power supply unit, have to buy a new one. The current one won't render the scenes without crashing the computer, so I ended up deleting a few things.
My main point is that the transition from the horizon to the sky is a bit harsh. I'm quite convinced that the sky is a photograph. It is not always simple to match the two.
The water could be justified with a focus of some sort, perhaps a boat. Maybe you should have combined the two most recent uploads into a single one. The water looks great. but there is a lack of haze in the scene which makes the items appear somewhat miniature.
Yes I agree with Alex regarding the composition, a good image that could benefit from cropping.
Forgot to ask: clouds it is a photo?
Excellent composition. It is constructed organically and almost faultlessly. However, I dare to make one essential remark which concerns the construction of the frame. The bottom quarter of the image needs to be cut off! Too much water! Photographers and artists have a rule: the line of the horizon should be approximately on 1/3 or on 2/3 heights of a shot. In this case it is necessary to lower the horizon line below, to give more sky and less water. And more! It is not necessary, that proportions of the monitor (4:3) dictated you a shot format. In this case it will be better to make proportions 16:9 or 16:10.